Jeroentje's Hotel Mystery

[jeroentje]

The second scene after my Cops & Robbers (http://www.geocities.com/superjeroentje/chase.html) painting, in what what appears to become a serie.

It started out as a DSG painting, but because it took me more than a week to finish, it didn't feel right to post it in the DSG thread.

http://members.lycos.co.uk/superjeroentje/hotel.jpg

[jeroentje]

Okay, this should be it. I could spend about 10 more hours on this, but I have had it with it.
If I have to paint another rock I'll go insane.

http://members.lycos.co.uk/superjeroentje/hoteldef.jpg

[FFS]

im glad the road has been more defined and as its still a work in progress im sure it will become more defined and noticable i suppose but to be honest i find the added tower/mountain thing in the center unwelcom and it puts me off the whole pictureit may just be because of the current stage its in but at the moment i dont like it there but i really like the rest of the picture and the clouds i like them but i dont like the way there in a sort of V shape it adds to the emphasis of the central thing and so adds to it overpowering i feel.