Space Girl -in progress-

[FearlessFosdick]

Haven't posted in freakin' forever. C&C appreciated.http://www.geocities.com/fozlessfoosnick/murataesque.txt

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I've seen this at the Drawing Board already. Amazing.
I like it as it is. Can't see that the hair and cloth don't match.
Doesn't look like WIP to me. I just don't like white backgrounds in general.

Don't ruin it!

[SEVANS]

Nice image, love the linework.

Add the lighting onto the clothing, so that it matches the hair, skin, metal etc.

Plus you may need to add a few extra clours to the clothes (or even just tones) so that the clothes aren't to monotone and easier to (see) seperate articles of clothing.

Great expression on the face, very cute smile.

[bear]

Apart from the obvious work of lighting the completely flat areas it looks pretty much done to me.

You might always try putting the red of the hair/eyes somewhere else in the pic unless you really want it to stand out.

[FearlessFosdick]

I'm thinking of leaving the orange matte. Looks kinda interesting I think.

http://www.geocities.com/fozlessfoosnick/murataesque1.txt

[Phuzion]

Great drawing! deffinately ditch the psychadelic background. There's no point and it only detracts from the girl. Just go with a plain, flat color field if you're going that road. Keep it up, it's lookin' killer. Peace

[SEVANS]

The flat orange still looks out of place with the rest of the nicely rendered pic.

Can see what you mean, you don't won't to dull the colour and lose the vibrant orange, but it doesn't look finished like this (to me anyway).

[Maruchan]

Excellent stuff, but yes deffinantly put more work into the suit. Give some shadows and highlights to the orange so it looks as good as the rest of the piece.