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Bloodywars
February 14th, 2004, 12:13 PM
Hey guys.This is my first drawing i have shown in front of great artist.Let me know what you think.

http://img5.photobucket.com/albums/v14/Bloodywars/Snipers.jpg
Bloodywars
February 14th, 2004, 12:28 PM
If anything looks bad to you tell me and i'll try to make it better.:D :D
Killer Napkins
February 14th, 2004, 01:21 PM
shiz man... noob? yeah right it looks good dude very good shading
Bloodywars
February 14th, 2004, 06:10 PM
Originally posted by Killer Napkins
shiz man... noob? yeah right it looks good dude very good shading


thx,well it's my very first drawing on this site.
Marcus
February 14th, 2004, 11:35 PM
one question what kind of gun is it the man on the right has? is it a M-16 A2 or a M4A1 or what? because if it is a M-16 I think the barel should be shortened a tiny little bit, but if its a M4A1 most of the gun is too long, sorry, did't mean to sound mean or anything...but all around I like it! GJ!
Bloodywars
February 15th, 2004, 07:53 AM
Originally posted by Marcus
one question what kind of gun is it the man on the right has? is it a M-16 A2 or a M4A1 or what? because if it is a M-16 I think the barel should be shortened a tiny little bit, but if its a M4A1 most of the gun is too long, sorry, did't mean to sound mean or anything...but all around I like it! GJ!



no offense taken.
I was triing to make an M-16.
Aidan
February 15th, 2004, 08:53 AM
It looks good but
1. Is it from reference?
2. Do you have it any bigger?
3. Maybe because of the size, i can't really make out, what that thing above their heads is supposed to be.
softdrawer
February 15th, 2004, 08:56 AM
you probly should work a bit on those hands, they need some redone. specialy the guy on the left.

but yeah, if you could make it bigger, id give you more hints but...

anyway, i like the composition.

alx
Marcus
February 15th, 2004, 10:58 PM
ill answer the third question aidan asked, its camoflauge, as part of training seals and many other sorts of military are trained in lacing leaves grass etc. into cloth and making their own camoflauge, this one seems to be of grass, yet I hope that answered your question! :D
Cinsev
February 15th, 2004, 11:02 PM
thats some hella good pencil work there friend
st_sleek
February 16th, 2004, 12:20 AM
Marcus, I think Aidan meant the long wire thing above their heads, not the grass that's on their hoods.

... I was trying to figure out what that thing was also.. make it bigger it's wayyy to small to make any definate crits on it.
Brium
February 16th, 2004, 03:17 AM
I think it's the antenna from the radio on his back?
Marcus
February 16th, 2004, 05:19 PM
could be, but there are also those other two lines in the grass that are weird, I dunno...:huh: