first post - navigator

[village idiot]

hello everyone, finally bit the bullet and put on some work, after being anonymous for so long.

http://www.imcmedia.co.uk/art/navigator.jpg

[loveable_rogue]

Nice Work!! - Looking forward to seeing some more!?;)

[-The Swift-]

Great work! the shades really make it stand out, keep it up!:)

[alex_86]

Nice man, GJ.

One thing I would recommend, for a revision or future sketches, is to try and keep all the angles friendly. If your lines start going off in wrong directions (in reference to different parts of the machine) the overall appeal and streamlinedness of the image goes down.

[young paddy1]

nice concept, looks like a mixture between a hanglider a matrix sentinel and a giant fish, very smooth

[village idiot]

thanks for the positive feedback, much appreciated.

[Seraph]

wow, very nice.

If anything, the perspective is maybe a little bit off in some places.

[JeniThus]

I really like your technique for showing light. The erasing quality really begins to bring the surface and form to life.
I would just recommend that you include the rest of the legs/feet in the image, their being cut off takes away from the potential of movement for the machine. But that's just something to keep in mind though. Your movement through tones from darks to light really give it a great sense of depth and the construction of the character/machine seems really unique. Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to see what you post next.
Jen

[CleptoCat]

Nice perspective on this one

Hey do ya know whatcha get when you cross the village idiot with the beast of burden?




...an oxymoron!?

[village idiot]

thanks again for the crits and the compliments, i'm feeling quite emotional......snifff...sniff
and jenithus that is some of the nicest things anyone's said in a long time about my work.

seraph- right about the perspective. way off in areas. mind you it was basically a doodle that went out of control.