Jumping into the Fray - first post

[Sularia]

I've been lurking here for a couple of months, and thought I'd finally take the plunge and post something of my own. Here it is.. Ardumas, The Overweight Trickster and his winged-cat familiar. This was a request for a role-play character.

Please, C&C are desired.

http://www.cgraytaylor.com/images/overweighttrickster.jpg

[Presence]

Well Sularia on behalf of the board welcome and it is awsome to have you here.

Now for the painful part, lol, kidding, I really dig this shot, it is super playful and you get a strong feeling for both of the characters (minus the mentioned story above)

The only crit I have is of the cat, I think if you simply brought a little shadow into play it wouldn't look as flat as it is comming across to me right now, other than that great piece, can't wait to see more.

[Sularia]

Yes, I do see that now. Some more shadows would definitely help there. I'll have to see about adding more tonight when I get home. :)

Thank you for the welcome and the crit!

Sularia