First finished tablet painting

[capone]

Any thoughts?, have I made any popular mistakes?, thanks

http://www.caponeart.com/deletefinishedrab.jpg

[Bluga]

The rabbit guy in the middle's mechanical leg is waaaay too long. And everything in the background is blurry. Also, the rabbit mans pose is unnatural. Good for a first finished one though.

[capone]

Have updated the pic, taking onboard comments from here and freinds, I have played about more with the contrast...adding deeper lines as well as light and dark on the rabbit. Smoke gets more sharper the nearer to the ship to make it less flat.

Still not perfect, but without destroying it I think thats all I can do for that now. With these problems in mind hopefully I should be able to tackle the problems earlier on with my next piece.

edit : actually, someone just reccomended to put more detail in the ground/mountain...suppose he has a point...might go back to it afterall:p