Latest on my digi painting

[capone]

This is coming along, but as I said in a previous post this is my first proper go using a tablet. Theres still a lot of touching up to do including light and shadows...but apart from that is there anything sticking out as being wrong?

Thanks

http://www.caponeart.com/saverab.jpg

[JeniThus]

I see the character has a cybernetic leg, but the angle that the hips open, and the outward turn of his other leg looks painful. The ships are looking really good so far, technically too.
Just be a little careful with the set up of the ship crashing, cause it's parallel so much to the picture plane angle of view that it might flatten out some. I wouldn't worry too much though, as long as you make sure you render it well, just something to watch out for! I look forward to seeing your work on it in the future!
Jen

[Joatley]

The ship has stronger highlights and darker outlines, so I read it as closer than the foreground character.
So, I'd add some contrast to the foreground and lose some of the detail in the background.
Also, the strongest light source for this would be the rocket fire from the back of the ship, so I'd make some long, dark shadows jutting away from that.
The drawing itself and the color choices are solid; it's just the contrasts that need some work. Hope this helps!