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pave.dow
February 9th, 2004, 07:54 PM
i am pleasure to find this forum.
here are some sketches frome my works in 2002.
the subject of the series of works is <SHEKONG>.
please critique.
http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v63/pavedow/2839607-store-embed.jpg

http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v63/pavedow/2839594-bus204-embed.jpg

http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v63/pavedow/2839587-bus204show-embed.jpg

http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v63/pavedow/2839566-storeinmind-embed.jpg

http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v63/pavedow/2839617-imdp-embed.jpg
aquateen000
February 9th, 2004, 08:01 PM
that looks good, :evilbat: i did an evil bat. cool. you have a cool style.
eljay
February 9th, 2004, 08:31 PM
Man! You got a great style... Would love to see them enviroments colored.
cheers
sajad126
February 9th, 2004, 10:18 PM
hmm, i see the arabic writing and your user ID, where are you from? also, i think you have a good grasp on those machine like pieces....keep up the good work.
pave.dow
February 11th, 2004, 01:29 AM
Originally posted by sajad126
hmm, i see the arabic writing and your user ID, where are you from? also, i think you have a good grasp on those machine like pieces....keep up the good work.

haha,there are several chinese writing in pics,too.;)
dongt worry.i am not terrorist,hehe.
sajad126
April 12th, 2004, 06:06 PM
lol, i was aksing only cuz i am of that decent, thought we had something in common....lol .
H.Evans
April 12th, 2004, 06:11 PM
great pieces... are you considering doing clor versions? any color work you're thinking of posting?
stacy
April 13th, 2004, 05:04 PM
hhahhaaha

ya yest ruski
i idvj really doesnt mean anything.....like ^mckcak said
sorry to burst your bubble :dork:
stacy
April 13th, 2004, 08:35 PM
pffttt
yutani eto nazivayetsa SHOOTKA!
sheesh.
someones touchy?
stacy
April 13th, 2004, 08:47 PM
sorry pave.......
here
comments::::
nice clean drawings
you really should color them....at least the first one
the terrorist guy is very very cool. though his face is quite expressionless you would (or i would) NEVER want to run in to him. ever.
goodjob
post more!
sandu22
April 13th, 2004, 10:18 PM
about your transporter. seems in the back is not any space for seats, your sketch is not real...also is not flat(the floor)..maybe with steps ..:chug: