abe sapien WIP, self portrait, negrones sketches

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abe sapien (this is a scene from the 1st TPB i am hooked on right now) WIP anny suggestions on how i should proceed? looks ok to me but i need crit so i can find my mistakes and correct them :D
http://users.domaindlx.com/abesketch/newdrawings/abeyet.jpg

here's a lil concept that i am planning on working on, not too confident abt the colors tho.
http://users.domaindlx.com/abesketch/newdrawings/negrobw.jpg

i was following the tutorial of this guy from daisuke www.simplestroke.com i kinda think the portrait turned out looking kinda like me :D or the guy really looked like me. dunno :D kinda looked a lil anime-ish tho.. i hate that! :arg: need more practicewith realism :roll:
http://users.domaindlx.com/abesketch/newdrawings/lessonportrait.jpg

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help on inputs anyone? :confused: i need to know whts my mistakes coz after just workin on it for a few hrs i dont see anything wrong. hehe.

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i think its pretty good...at least above me...so i got no crits..

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thanks man :D u rule! we all need more practice. :chug: ill post more updates soon