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REAU
February 8th, 2004, 09:28 PM
http://www.hire-ground.com/images/reau/YBORG-GIRL3.jpg
Cloxboy
February 9th, 2004, 12:59 AM
That's pretty cool. I'm not sure exactly what I'm looking at though. Does the big guy have a hole in his torso? or is she looking at a mirror on him? or is he wearing a reflective piece of armor? If this reflective surface is contouring his body, you need to show that with highlights and warp the reflected image where the armor curves. Also, the buff guy's arms are kinda flat, his deltoids and biceps are the same hue, should be more gradual. And finally, the light source is kinda sketchy right now, I see top lighting and frontal lighting, but it look's like you only meant to have top lighting. You might look at yourself in a mirror with top lighting, do some reference sketches. OK, enough nit-picking, nice work.
jasonpuppy
February 9th, 2004, 04:48 AM
I think the girl is 'inside' the guy and the guy is a robot. Nice work, dude.
giusep
February 9th, 2004, 07:36 AM
cool!
Balton
February 9th, 2004, 09:50 AM
lol, what girls secretly dream of ;)
very cool idea!
Dahsramu
February 9th, 2004, 10:18 AM
This is really nicely done, though I think you need to define the area inside the "guy" a little more - it looks like the girl is in some sort of void, not like she's actually sitting inside him...

I believe it has to do with how her arms are bent. The way you drew them implies that she's sitting pretty far back inside the cyborg because her arms are extended out away from her body. The cyborg doesnt seem to be that wide so her spatial positioning makes it less believable that she's sitting inside the guy.

This reminds me of some of Masamune Shirow's concepts... I think in an issue of his latest work (Ghost in the Shell 2) he has a scene where the heroine is inside a man-cyborg...
Cloxboy
February 9th, 2004, 10:47 AM
I didn't see it then and I'm having trouble seeing it now. It's a great piece but there is room for alterations and improvement. I agree though..."Nice work, dude."
REAU
February 9th, 2004, 04:13 PM
Thanx for the comments guys. I knew there was something weird about this painting I just couldn't but my finger on it. I think you got it Dahsramu thanx. And this is completely inspired by man machine interface. I wanted to see what I could do with the idea of woman inside of a man....cyborg

What do you guys think of the color inside of the cyborg should I let more light in or is it ok the way it is?