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effenndee
February 6th, 2010, 11:09 PM
G'day!

Thanks for visiting my working-in-progress, sketch-dumping, general-art-stuff neck of the woods. I'm on a mission to improve and create better artworks.

I'm going to use this space as a step by step progress drop for artworks I'm most active with. Starting off with a drop of a sketch below that I am building into a larger action scene.

Please feel free to leave constructive criticism where appropriate. Many thanks in advance.

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Got pose and muscle reference from some posemaniacs (http://www.posemaniacs.com/blog/) pics and then general wing refs from pics off google image search.

effenndee
February 8th, 2010, 05:02 AM
Been busy today! Made some progress with work things and got to a life drawing class which was great =) May post up some of those when I work out the easiest way to get 'em digital.

Update on the angel guy - insert dragon and clouds bwah!

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BlackDelphin
February 8th, 2010, 08:06 AM
Well i think so far so good :)
Posting some other works would help us give you better input..

The upper part of the drawing is really dark, witch i think gives it an unbalanced feel..try making only the dragon have a dark value, if you want to concentrate on him. As it is right now, my eyes get a bit confused and run all over the place..

But then again seeing another step on this and keeping my mouth shut in the mean time could be better.

Welcome to cA's sketchbooks too :meow: