need quick C&C!!!

[digitalgannon]

hey this is my creature design for Thunderdome minus the BG, please C&C the creature as to small things you might change, or things that you think are working. Thanks!
http://digitalgannon.com/td3.jpg

[Malice X]

Good Stuff there.

You might want to add some more depth to the fur and claws, they look a little flat in some areas

[gauss]

well for it's design, the vestigial back legs are fine but if the tail has grown into some sort of weapon-like appendage, at that length i'd make the base of the tail a lot wider/stronger, so that it goes to a bit of a taper. not that it has to be super-pronounced, but right now the tail seems evenly weighted all the way through if not a little heavier on the end.

[digitalgannon]

here it is w/ bg, i took what you both siad into consideration, and THANK YOU more C&C is welcome.
http://digitalgannon.com/td1.JPG

[plaf]

i think the powerful front legs for walking on work really well, but the tail just somehow doesn't do it for me. maybe it's the shape?
i think a little more muscles and structure in the back legs would be good as well, they seem too short as they are. (in my humble opinion of course) :)

also, i'd bend his left arm a bit more and add some more muscles.

right. hope that's somehow useful.

all the best

[digitalgannon]

hey thanx plaf, yeah i totally see the tail thing, it looks to flimsy, like its just lying there outta place. I wil definately fix that, thanks a bunch. I will try to beef his back legs up too, maybe extend them some as well. I went to your site- Great stuff man, you got some great quality 3d and 2d stuff, i like your style.