cartoonfox is back (as if any one cares :D)

[cartoonfox]

hi, i'm back. i'm not dead!! i just had LOADS of work to do. plus i took a break from drawing (bad idea) to get into webdesign. i still did life drawing, dont worry about that, just none of my own stuff. heres what i produced while messing in flash for weeks.
http://www.cartoonfox.hostrocket.com
theres a portfolio with some of my stuff there, but nothing new.

anyway, i'm back! but i'm out of practice, so i need help with a creature i'm working on.
as i have had no practice with creatures for ages, guess who i got insperation from? anyone who gueses right gets a cookie. a huge one. from me.

http://img6.photobucket.com/albums/v19/cartoonfox/sketches/creature4.jpg

i noticed the hand is messed up, but anything else (including the hand) please help me!

ta.

peace.

[dfacto]

Well, I don't actually see anything wrong with the hand. Its an original creature design so I wouldn't know what is the correct hand shape for an...an...ogre orc troll thing. :huh:

My crits are that his right kneecap is far too wrinkly and looks wrong. I would also say that his man-boobies need more work to make them look more 3d. Aside from that not much to say. Nice work.

[cartoonfox]

hi, LMFAO man - boobies :D :D :D :D :D

thanks for the crits. the knee looks strange maybe because i havnt put the texture anywhere else? i skin wrinkles etc is unfinished, but i'll lessen it and see what it looks once finished.
the actual hand is ok, i ment the far finger (thurthest from the thumb) is wonkey.
i think the far arm is too short too, i'll sort it out


thanks again.