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HYBRID187
February 6th, 2004, 01:11 AM
the spelling mistakes are being addressed
jon 6 pages (http://www.wave.co.nz/~abaddon/cover.html)
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HYBRID187
February 7th, 2004, 02:47 PM
sheesh tough crowd ok ill try and intice
page 1
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staylor
February 7th, 2004, 03:03 PM
Pretty cool stuff so far. My main critique is that the news announcer seems awfully composed for something he has no idea about. I'd research the radio announcement that happened while the hindenburg went down. The whole "Oh the humanity" speech. The fear and emotion that poor reporter had would help out the mood of your comic.
HYBRID187
February 7th, 2004, 03:25 PM
good idea man thanx for the input
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