Hostile Takeover

[Anurizm]

just a small improvement from my old work you all have seen from 2002. time to practice more :)

http://cizel.com/~anurizm//Index/images/gallery/Sketches/HostileTakeover.jpg

[DarkMana]

well the overall idea is amazing man!
but it seems his anatomy it off, his arm with the gun looks great, but his chest is way too blown up, and where it connects to his shoulder looks kinda wierd too me?

i know u didnt specifically ask for crits, but i thought id drop my 2 cents worth anyways

Ry

[Anurizm]

any crit is appreciated :)

[sodomizer]

I agree with dark mana on his input... but also...

I think your gun perspective needs to be fixed. What you might want to consider is lightly drawing some lines of perspect, that way all the components in the figure are in perspective? Just an opinion.. it help me a lot.