sEcOnD PoSt oMg!

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heres an elven dancer! yipee!
crits and stuff welcome!
http://mercury.walagata.com/w/pitufoo/nedancer.jpg

[Sok N. Wett]

Nice picture...I really hate critisicing people's artwork, but all i can say is fix the left arm up a little and try to make every line crisp and clear, meaning if it's a curve make it look like a curve....for one example look at her pole, make it more straight other than that excellent job, you should color it if you know how.

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ok i'm gonna start coloring it then, (once i get the time to...). thanks for the crits. now anyone else wanna post somthing? cmon..... :D

[INFERNOmunky]

pretty cool...man those earrings look like torture devices....
i actually think her left hand is fine but her right wrist looks like the only thing thats off to mee....cool jets

[SeraphSword]

I like it. My only crit would be that Baby Got Back!:p Her thighs seem to each be about twice as thick as her waist. Small waists are okay and I'm sure it's at least partially a style thing, but it may be a bit extreme. However you don't really notice it unless your looking. Good job overall tho.

[John]

Try rotating the picture 10 - 20 degrees clockwise. You'll notice quite a difference :D

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heh i know she's got massive hips, and its not actually my style to do them that... veluptuously (i love that word)... but this pic started out as a really cartoony babe type with exaggerated features, and then i didnt like it so i shrunk the boobs and turned it into a lil more realistic elf girl. :D

the earring were one of my favorite parts, i was trying to give her something that would stand out among all the other elves dancing around with staves in the world, despite the fact that they look like they would be waaay too heavy and extremely impractical... (those moons on the end would hook on to just about anything, and while dancing, that's gotta hurt!)


and if anyone plays warcraft, then you'll know what i'm talking about when i say that she's a night elf. (which explains all the moon stuff and the leaves) :)

[Sok N. Wett]

Ahhh yes i play Warcraft now I understand. Night Elves are so cool.