Exotic Female !!Nudity!!

[SicFrost]

As fas as the girl (Veronika) goes I'm done, I just have to develope the background, any tips and comments welcome..

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http://www.crackerbee.com/pix/veronika-best-small.jpg

[SEVANS]

Before you woory about the background, fix the most obvious problem - her hips. The angle of her butt and front leg doesn't match the rest of her body. AND If she has twisted her lower half then you'd need to alter her stomach to show the twisting of her hips.

It not quite right.

[Devilock138]

Looks great. But I'm not sure exactly what's going on; either she has the most outrageous ghetto-booty or she's oddly twisted. Hr bottom half looks like she should be leaning forward into a cleaevage shot at a hard angle. I'd work on those hips and ass... they look great, just a bit contorted.

[Xavi]

to me, apart from the face, she just seems to lack a certain feminity, like maybe you overdid the detail on the muscle tone.
other than that, i like it! great facial expression

[SicFrost]

ok i KINDA get what you are saying SEVANS, but do you mean i should make her ass smaller? I mean i did overdo that, i didnt think anyone would notice, but apperently someone did...is that all that you think is wrong with her anatomy? or is there anything else i should look into?

hehe DEVILOCK she does have the most outrageously ghetto booty but as SEVANS pointed out the angle of it is a little bit odd...i guess more practice for me

XAVI this picture of her is as feminine as her in real life, i agree smooth skin with model-like look and everything that goes with it is really appealing, but for some (i.e. me) a little muscle never hurt, i believe that a woman should be strong inside as well as out, at least thats what does it for MOI...

THANKS for all the great C&C, please keep them comming...thats the only way ill improve

[SicFrost]

Heres an update I hope it shows improvement, tell me what you think.

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http://www.crackerbee.com/pix/veronika2.jpg

[elevenrequiem]

you've got a really tough texture going there, which works well.. but then you lose that in the face. her facial features are considerably darker and smoother, almost like an ink wash. so, to keep consistancy, i think you should either push your darks in the entire piece, or lighten up the face. great work though.

[SicFrost]

tnx dude, but dont you think it SHOULD be darker cuz that part of her face is covered by hair? and its slightly turned...
what do you think?

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