Ships, any suggestions?

[SamBrown36]

Hey, this is my first post. Just looking for some suggestions, ideas, comments, criticism. Anything goes, just be truthful. Thanks


http://www.angelfire.com/art/sambrown36/MFShip.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art/sambrown36/MFShip2.jpg

[bOne]

These are interesting rough concept.

I personnaly have problems with the contrast between the wings very straight and the shapes very smooth. I think you could find a balance.

Will you do finished pieces of these concept ?

[Theo]

you got some good shapes going on them both, but b0ne has a point, Try making the wings more organic, or atleast shear them back a bit, give em some speed.

Nice rough rendering technique btw, colorful:)

-t

[SoulSaver]

Very cool concepts, im jealous of people who can think and draw mechanically. My only crit would be the wings in the second one. What would be the reason for the raising and lowering of the wings? They couldnt go low enough to be used as landing gear, and they look like ships oars. I would make them stationary and beef them up a bit to make them look more resistant to high speeds.

Great work.