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JeniThus
February 2nd, 2004, 08:03 PM
Hi, I know my style is a little different from most of the other posts I see here, but I'd really like to hear what y'all think of this little monster I made recently. Thanks for any feedback! Jen
http://www.squidartjen.com/monster1.jpg
catterpillar
February 3rd, 2004, 02:37 AM
is that a baby's head coming off the side of the monster's? :hmm: I like it! nice colours too.
JeniThus
February 3rd, 2004, 09:03 PM
Thanks catterpillar, Sorry, but that isn't actually a baby's head coming off the side of the monster's. It's just an ear. But I can understand the confusion.:)
Thanks again for responding to my post!
Jen
JeniThus
February 3rd, 2004, 09:12 PM
Here are a couple more monsters I've made recently. They're a little bit simpler, but they hold to my style. I'd love to hear any feedback y'all have. Thanks so much. Jen
http://www.squidartjen.com/giraffethinglow.jpg
http://www.squidartjen.com/happylittlefireguylr.gif
Steph Laberis
February 3rd, 2004, 10:23 PM
^___^
Fire breathing fox is still my fave.
...and why haven't more people added feedback? These are so neato!
ChaosEidolon
February 3rd, 2004, 11:28 PM
haha! these are great. very nice style youve got. The animation on your website was fun too =)
Post more when you get em
mtw
February 3rd, 2004, 11:34 PM
Cute style.
johanson
February 4th, 2004, 12:39 PM
Hey Jen,
These creatures of yours are getting better and better. I think your style is solidifying into something really enjoyable, AND, marketable.
These certainly can work as stand alone “silhouetted” characters (as they are now). In that case, I’d suggest taking the masonite out of the background on the bottom two. It makes them look unfinished. You might also want to clean up some of the edges on the six-legged-fire-fox. What I’d really like to see, is for these characters to be given their own simple, yet stunning backgrounds. I want to see the giraffe in Africa, the fire-fox in China, and the Ham Eater in a dark spooky forest.
Well, those are just a few of my thoughts. Dig the characters. I want to see a whole thread dedicated to JeniThus’s Monsters.
Later,
-andrew
JeniThus
February 4th, 2004, 04:10 PM
Thanks for the posts you guys!
I totally agree that the masonite texture has got to go, and I am actually realy excited about creating the environments for each monster. I think that will be my next post. :)
JeniThus
February 7th, 2004, 12:13 AM
Thanks Mike,
It was really cool to come on here and see what so many other artists have been, and are doing. So often I feel we each get kind of isolated in our own bubbles. COol to see your new work too. Awesome horror stuff, keep posting!
Jen
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