line sketch

[JasonCGNU]

A quick line sketch. sorry about the lined paper but i actually lost my sketch book. :cry: But yeah this is a fairly quick sketch of a primative futuristic flying thing. You can figure it out.
C&C please
http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v62/jasoncgnu/flyer.bmp

[MuffinMan]

uhhh it doesn't look very dynamic and it looks poorly constructed.

[JasonCGNU]

Well then muffin do you have any suggestions on how to make it better?

cause im open to suggestion, besides pure crit. doesn't really help anyone.

[flavorite]

it looks more like an old school kind of robotics and stuff, like renaissance flying machines with new guns added on... not so futuristic. make it look less rickety (thin bars and chunky wings make it look more home-made) for a futuristic feel... ;)

[JasonCGNU]

yeah i guess what i was goin for was the idea of a sort of post apocalyptic future where people have to scavange parts and make some of their own. That is why it is a mix of old school and future. :D