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Mr. Personality
February 2nd, 2004, 11:35 AM
These are two characters that have been hanging around in my sketchbooks for a long time. I got motivated to draw a large version after I got my Wacom a couple of days ago. I'm going to ink this and then color it in Photoshop.

I had to scan this in 2 pieces that's why there's a line in the middle.

When I came up with this guy back in '94 he was supposed to be named Mr. Personality. Mojo, the girl, is a newer idea, and still a work in progress.

As always, crits are welcome and appreciated.

http://www.alexrichburg.com/mrpweb.jpg
MuffinMan
February 2nd, 2004, 11:42 AM
cool characters....especilly the Mr.personallity, i can see what his personality is like already...
Mr.Personality should have a i nice touch of color that brings out his personality...colors can play a big part in some characters...and the size of them too!
SEVANS
February 2nd, 2004, 01:46 PM
Sometimes you can find some good shit in your old sketchbooks, this is an example.

Not much to crit, I like it (and I'm a fussy bastard).
MuffinMan
February 3rd, 2004, 04:34 PM
i agree with you sevans i just looked in my old sketch books and discovered how much i have gotten better!
Mr. Personality
February 4th, 2004, 10:31 PM
Here are the inks. I traced the pencils on a lightbox and then inked the drawing with a combination of micron pigma markers, tachikawa pen, and a black prismacolor marker. Let me know what you think. i know my inks can use some work, especially the feathering.

http://www.alexrichburg.com/mrp700web.jpg
MuffinMan
February 5th, 2004, 06:21 AM
nice...i thought mojo was going to be plain naked...
Asmodeus
February 5th, 2004, 09:52 AM
I like them both, nice style. Let me tell you some things I think could help you to improve your stuff:

Pencil: I like a lot his posse and expression, specially his left hand.
I think heīs too big in relation with her... I mean, I like disproportionated anatomies, but itīs good idea to stablish some relation between the characters, maybe drawing both heads with the same size. I also find something wrong with his left foot. Your anatomy itīs not bad but I think you should work on it. The human body is probably the most difficult thing to draw, practice using photos and anatomy books.

Ink: nice :). What about doing a inked shaded by pencil?
Mr. Personality
February 11th, 2004, 06:59 PM
Thanks for all your comments. Here's the final colored version.

http://www.alexrichburg.com/mrpfinal.jpg
CANUCK_DOUGY
March 4th, 2004, 10:18 AM
Hey...im sooo feeling your first sketch. Really love the position of his body. If he were a cookie i would eat him...thats how much i like it. Keep on cooking the good stuff....peace