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yeticatcher
February 2nd, 2004, 02:13 AM
Not sure where I was going with this one. Plenty of things wrong with it, but I had fun giving her a go.

http://www.trubalcava.com/sketchbook/Launch.jpg

Forge
February 2nd, 2004, 07:50 AM
i like her... Phoenix like ?

SEVANS
February 2nd, 2004, 01:49 PM
Actually i like it.

I can't see anything too obviously wrong with it.

I think that this would look great rendered in a cheesy, bold bright, 60's comic way.

yeticatcher
February 4th, 2004, 01:55 AM
Thanks, guys!

Forge: Once I put her in a kind of spandex costume, I realized that she might turn out to be a version of Pheonix. However, I can assure you that wasn't might first thought as I started the sketch. I may re-think it further.

SEVANS: I appreciate your willingness to give out higher marks on this piece. I am considering coloring her - thanks for the suggestion.

-Yeti

Sok N. Wett
February 5th, 2004, 05:36 PM
Oh add wings and you'll be fine. Good job keep it up.

Skank
February 5th, 2004, 06:35 PM
i like it!
very smooth and it has a classic look to it.
i think the only thing buggin me is her abdomen area, too many lines, and the center line is a bit off at the bottom i think.
good work!