ball pen sketch - need advice!

[Asmodeus]

There are things that I like in this drawing, like the face, the tension in the neck... but I´m not convinced about his arm and hand... What do you think? Critics are wellcome.

http://www.dragonink.web1000.com/Dibujos/Dragon_Ink_Dibujos/dibujos_Javier/boligrafo013.jpg

[AnarchyAo2]

I know what you mean, but I can't put my finger on it. I'm stumped.

[young paddy1]

The muscles of the upper arm seem a little out of place I thinck the straightness of the biscep as it heads toward the armpit should be slightly more rouded, and the hand is a touch small for the amount of fore-shortening you have in the forearm.

[mr jack]

Very nice. Very VERY nice. Yeah, I think that paddy summed up all your problems. But miraculous job on the face. Just wow.

[Snowball]

Hello. Ya I think what the main problem with the arm is, the bicep is connecting right up his armpit. When in actual fact our bicepts only draw towards our pits slightly. Fix that problem and it will look magnafique!

[omarpac]

well his arm shud be pointin towards us
thus we shud only see his biceps
and his anterior deltoid
u drew the lateral deltoid on

[mecheson_art]

really nice character, yeah.. just that little thing with arm.. but another trhing.. when you get that done, just work a lit bit on the lines, try to pley around with th line quality, because in some areas it makes it look kinda flat.. but aside of that. the face is really cool!! keep up with that!!,,

[jetpack42]

also, the delt seems like its way too...inward...rather then bulging outward...does that seem right?