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WeiYa
January 30th, 2004, 11:15 AM
http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/05/f/2/Ortos_Girl.jpg

My home town is in the Ortos, some places very beautiful, person too is.
Mongolia girl body wear the wedding clothing. :)
bwkeough
January 30th, 2004, 12:34 PM
the face and clothing are very nicely rendered but the hands need to be finished to the same level, they are too blurry.
Shadowkiller
January 30th, 2004, 04:31 PM
I agree with bwkeough about the hands. Love the work its great.
faithrenee
February 3rd, 2004, 07:55 AM
This image is very beautiful - especially the face. You did a great job on the headdress with all of the detailed beads. The color choice is good too. Maybe try to bring some cool colors into your shadows. Your composition/design is strong.

More work should be done to the hands though and the bottom half of the image. The honeycomb texture in the hair and the blurs are a bit distracting.
WeiYa
February 4th, 2004, 03:39 AM
http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/06/4/6/The_second_Ortos_Girl___.jpg

Because the some friend say the first not exquisite, therefore I draw a meticulous one.
;)
faithrenee
February 4th, 2004, 08:09 AM
Very beautiful changes you made!
The new image has alot more vibrance and contrast.

You did all of those changes in 1 day - very impressive.
This is definitely a portfolio piece.
Nucleardan
February 4th, 2004, 08:23 AM
It's a well executed in the technique you've chosen, however...I do have a gripe with the her hands. They look like they could belong to Gumby. I'm not sure if this was intentional, but they do have a rubbery feel.
DanSTC
February 4th, 2004, 11:44 AM
The other hand "reads" better in the new position in the second one, making it a stronger composition than the first, though the lighting on the left hand looks a little off now. (Which can be easily fixed.)

The improved detail on the hands in the second one also helps to make them work better. Although if I were you, I think I'd touch up the wristbands so they don't look so pixelated, and so they have a proper light source instead of being static. As of now, they look like placeholders.

Overall, excellent job. :)
WeiYa
February 5th, 2004, 05:13 AM
Thank everybody to my opinion...:)
I will in the another work inside more perfect and avoid the mistake.;)