a hawk

[Osmus]

http://img7.photobucket.com/albums/v18/osmus/hawk.bmp one mistake i noticed was the shape of the head..its too round for a hawk. but i like it like this. what do you think? are there other mistakes i don't see? thanks for viewing!

[SEVANS]

The image just appears too grey to me.
Push some of the blacks abit more. Create more contrast and bring it to life.

Perhaps add a highlight into the eye, highlights in eyes generally give the subjects abit more 'life'

Pretty good sketch through - keep doing more.

[Osmus]

thank you for your advice, i appreciate the feedback! : ) hows this?http://img7.photobucket.com/albums/v18/osmus/hawk2.bmp