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Grendel
January 29th, 2004, 05:49 PM
http://igrendel.com/images/colors/ewwq.jpg

dusty imp
January 29th, 2004, 05:55 PM
The execution is allright, but, honestly, its pretty boring.
There is nothing going on, and its very basic as a concept.
You might want to elaborate on it.

::EPIC::
January 29th, 2004, 06:08 PM
you might want to crop it to a close headshot, more 'in your face' kinda look, with the angle way out he looks stiff..

Epoch
January 29th, 2004, 06:13 PM
The face is VERY interesting, though personally i think the composition as a whole would benefit if the face were not in the center... just my humble opinion. Other than that, great work

Wohr Path
January 30th, 2004, 02:57 AM
Yeah I like the face, but putting your point of interest directly in the center of the peice is generally a bad idea. If you split the paper into thirds with lines vertically and horizantially the 4 intersections are good spots to put your focal point. Also it might be cool if only one of his eyes was light and the other in shadow? Nice gritty style.