updated after crit

[young paddy1]

http://img6.photobucket.com/albums/v19/youngpaddy1/sketches/crouching_jedi.jpg

c+c the shite out of me if you would

[MastaBlasta]

the idea is great but the entire body is disproportioned and askew with exception to the outstretch arm in the center which is amazing.

[Epoch]

you chose an interesting pose for this jedi/padawan. I love the center arm/hand, but his left leg seems too small and his right arm seems to be made of spaghetti... no bones/joints/etc. Last point- His head seems to be akwardly positioned(the ear is too highand the skin that attaches the skin to the bottom of the chin seems to large) I would suggest beefing up the leg and reworking his arm/hand... I would like to see this finished! hope i helped

[young paddy1]

http://img6.photobucket.com/albums/v19/youngpaddy1/sketches/crouching_jedi_2.jpg

is this any better

[Mindflaw]

Hi

Nice drawing
I think it was a good thing that U changed the style of the sword to fit with the rest of your drawingstyle.

One crit is that his right arm seems to short.
check it up.