human birth wip

[qwerty]

this is one of three sketches that i have done this week that encompass a concept that i am trying to tackle. the idea is based on the studies of Sitchin... in short, we were created as a slave race by an alien race by mixing their dna with the dna of primitive man. this is the birth of humanity, or the process of it. i am new to this area of study so lay it on me. its not a finished sketch, but i think it might be a little cliche.
http://img14.photobucket.com/albums/v43/takethe405/humanbirthwebready.jpg

[Mercer]

I never heard that theory before...gotta read more books. I think that maybe some sketches where u mass out objects of all sorts then choosing a few a rolling with that. The shading could use a little more practcing but it is a sketch. Maybe try a sketch with a fetus or very early stages of development are taking place....



mercer

[Giacomo]

Looks great. I love your use of tone.

I'd suggest using some big areas of dark tone to create drama. Sorry, I couldn't resist trying it myself:

http://home.earthlink.net/~bucket/Birthrev01.jpg

Good luck.

[qwerty]

oh yea. looks great. i kind of slowed down cause i have a pretty busy school schedule. but thanks for the help, i appreciate it.