Wyvern Vs. Rogue

[jcterminal]

i'm not directly placing this image here because it's freakin' huge and i haven't resized it because... well it's not done.

TMP5d.jpg (http://www.shackifieds.com/files/uploads/TMP5d.jpg)

i know i need to tighten it up a bit, fix one of the wyvern's wings... add a little more detail in the buildings around them and do something nice with the clouds... anything else i should be aware of before i commit?

let me know.

[ATOMICsizePENCIL]

yep, tighten up that wyvern!

the whole pick looks like it needs more defined lines. its too soft. (imo)

also (imo) you might have better success with a smaller color pallette.

and what is the grey stuff in the top right corner? clouds? i can see the dark blue of the sky, but if that grey stuff is clouds....a) it would go over the moon, and b) it would be a different shade than the moon.

otherwise not a bad composition.