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WeiYa
January 27th, 2004, 10:41 PM
http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/05/6/6/Pinocchio___.jpg
My heart inside of Pinocchio.On the other hand source is in my solitude.
The felling is sometimes and by oneself and then resemble a puppet that is manipulateds, and can't invisiblely manipulate to down succeed in escaping from this world.
dusty imp
January 27th, 2004, 10:57 PM
Nicely done, i like it a lot.
The face and expression are wonderful.
The pose is very nice too.
Judging by your post, i take it that English is not your first language, so i'll try to critique as simply as i can.
I assume that the character is a female, but it has no breasts, so that makes it a little confusing.
The right hand is way too big, and it doesnt look like it belongs to a human, let alone a female. The paint chips, while good-looking, are too crisp compared with the rest of the figure, so they stick out too much. Left foot looks like it could be the right foot, and right foot is a bit flat.
There are smaller things but i'll hold them for now.
Hope this helps.
WeiYa
January 27th, 2004, 11:12 PM
Thank you!I come from Inner Mongolia of China.A student, English is not good to beg your pardon...:)
He is a boy, but I hold of not is very good, hehe
You say of help to me very big, thanks!
dusty imp
January 27th, 2004, 11:27 PM
Heh, i'm from US.
Mongolia...
Must be a cool place.
Um, anyway.
So its a boy?
Why don't you make him into a girl then?
It might be just me, but i think the face definitely belongs to a girl. And that would set it aside from the traditional pinocchio concept too, making it more original.
If you need me to explain anything i say more clearly in order to make it easier for you to understand, i'll be happy to.
WeiYa
January 28th, 2004, 12:13 AM
:)
Good eyesight!Admire, first I am what want to make uniform a girl!
Is the good place of an exchanges here, come here behind I come in sight of a lot of great of painting!Understood me a lot of.
I feel what oneself can progress unremittingly!You feel my painting where have the mistake and then tell I, hereafters to still please close much to shine on.:bheart:
teh fonx
January 28th, 2004, 10:44 AM
i lived in mongolia for a year, pretty neat place, great pic btw, no major faults, it really has alot of presonality
jilted_one
January 28th, 2004, 12:58 PM
the only crit i gave this is that the hand hand doesn't look to puppety if you know what i mean. Apart from that the wholeanatomy looks good.
WeiYa
January 29th, 2004, 12:37 AM
I do not know and should how say, and I feel to have a the part is a human race and age's relation, see me, and may can not tell what now, but past someone say resemble girl, hehe
http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/04/8/a/2003_me.jpg
WeiYa
January 29th, 2004, 12:46 AM
http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/03/0/d/Girl_and_crow.jpg
The crow fly in outworker everyday outside window, four with each other and what is up tell.Finally and one day, it break the window, and hope earnestly with a young girl communication.People are all frightened hid to get up, but the young girl did not frightened, and she slowly near to bigness of crow, preparation listen to the crow to tell her secret.
WeiYa
January 29th, 2004, 12:48 AM
http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/04/e/a/The_merriment_is_consumedly_of.jpg
Wish to wish the happiness of all people Chinese New Year!
WeiYa
January 29th, 2004, 12:50 AM
http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/01/7/6/Tower.jpg
I am out of humor, therefore appearance felling too very improbity.
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