zoe.girl + tank

[julie cheung]

hullo,
i'm new here, though i have lurked for a long time.. i have already learned a lot by just looking at the pics posted here!
i hope somebody can give me some crits or comments for this picture. i did it today and its just very rough still
any ideas?
thanks :D

http://black-helix.hostprime.com/zoe_tank.jpg

[jrr]

the tank looks alittle soft, and i think this would look better if you moved her off center. also it looks like there's a bit of the yellow highlight on her head but no where else but on her leg. are you going to post updates?

[julie cheung]

thanks for the reply, i will try to move her a bit to the side, good tip.
about the yellow, i need to put some highlights and shadows everywhere still.. and i wonder if should remove her whole outline o.O
i'd like to post some updates, but i often give up on pictures before i finish them :( i'll try though

btw jrr, i love your art :nod:

[Hermchen]

Nice start. I'm shure this will develope into a nice piece of art.

I just thought here right lower leg might be too short. Or at least the proportions of the right leg are off. You might want to fix that.

[jemstone]

Looks rather like Makita from The Red Star...

Nice work!

But, I have to agree with Hermchen, the legs look a bit off, either due to foreshortening or proportions... Might want to investigate that.

-JEM