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CleptoCat
January 25th, 2004, 04:59 PM
Finally got around to finishing this one. Hope you like. Crits welcome

http://www.dragonthree.com/bedangel3_2.jpg
Jorn
January 26th, 2004, 01:14 PM
damn , i love those wings !
great idea i must say.
I do have one little remark, i think those little blue lines on the blancket don't fit with it , maybe you should blur them a bit ?

anyway, overall it's a lovely painting,

my compliments.

Jorn.
CleptoCat
January 26th, 2004, 04:44 PM
Thx Jorn. Yeah I need to make the wrinkles in the covers look more like wrinkles. Im also going to try and add more over all detail. Thx again
dusty imp
January 26th, 2004, 06:25 PM
I would suggest you to spend less time working on itty-bitty details and more time working on the drawing as a whole.
Use harder shadows and more color variations, lots of things look very flat because you didn't - angel's dress, for instance.
And i would suggest that you do something about her lips, like making them smaller - the smile looks idiotic, for lack of better term.