a bot and thing

[Killer Napkins]

uhh dunno just tryin to work more on perspective ... which is kinda off on the bot.. also tryin to work the markers more.. which kinda sucks but oh well ..

http://www.renderosity.com/photos/ArtistArticle6762.jpg

and heres a little study thing i tryed to do

http://www.renderosity.com/photos/ArtistArticle6764.jpg

[Killer Napkins]

neet

[Sammy]

Nice studies, you should do more of them. It's really helpfull to draw designs clear like that so you can get a full grasp of the perspective.
The bot turned out good, but I can see you having a hard time with the ellipses, they are rather tough ... At first it's always tempting to make them straight up and down like you've done, but you need to angle them acording to the angle of your perspective... that's why you see so many ellipses with lines thru them, the artist is trying to find the middle perspective line between the major and minor axis.. (and when it's all done you wanna be able to fold your elipse in half over that line and have both sides be equal)

[Killer Napkins]

oh yeah i see what u mean about the elipses.. i think ill check out scotts tutorials again.. and i think ill study a whole lot more with this .. thanks sammy

[Red_Rook]

the bots pretty badass, but like sammy said, the elipses... Oh and napkins ive noticed this in alot of your work, your line art is sorta dirty? no more like, rushed or ahand thats not quite steady enough. I dunno but I sorta get that feeling.

Nice one
Rook

[Killer Napkins]

thanks yeah.. basically i suck with a pen..haha.. i dunno cleaness i suck at... i just get so used to pencil like sketchin then when i switch to pen its hard to make clean lines for me.. i dunno what else i can do besides practice.. or use a ruler a lot haha