The Navigator [WIP]

[Edwin Bickford]

Hi. Here is my latest work. I thought it came out ok. Few things bother me. But I think I achieved a few things I set out to accpomplish.
If you guys have any tips or comments that could make this or my art better, it would be much appreciated.

Thanks

http://www.pencil-pushers.com/ed/Ed/TheNavigator.JPG

[Red_Rook]

dude if it really is a wip why dont you post it in that forum?

Other then that I think its sorta cool :) Its a bit confusing though. Lemme guess you drew that lying down or slouching in a chair. You can tell by the way the head is shaped.