coloring job

[natethegrate]

hi all,
i bought me a wacom at chrismas,this was my first attempt to color one of my linework with the tablett.
i ve chose a strong and simple line to do a comic-like piece...
c&c is apreachiated,

http://www.natethegrate.com/pics/pols.jpg

hope ya like it

natE

[young paddy1]

Unless this is to be set early morning a little more colour would give some life to the piece, Greater definition of the lips would help with the over all character, but other than those points it looks good, I'd like to see a full body though.

[Wohr Path]

This looks pretty good, I really like the colors you have chosen, but I think you could add more contrast to the shadows to get a little more realism. Right now I get a good feel for what color everything should be, but the shading is very light. Just keep working at it, nobody gets it exactly right their first time heh. I like the drawing btw keep at it.

[Red_Rook]

looks pretty good, but...

two words: MORE CONTRAST


it would make it rock that bit more :)

[natethegrate]

thx youre right,
i see the missin contrast when i look at the pic now, i should darken the shadow areas more...

next try i will fix it

thx natE

[DanSTC]

I think this guy would work much better if you added some large love-handles onto him.

[plastic]

i agree with Red_Rook. and maby define the light source a bit more. i think its comeing from the left. love handles? i dont think so....