oo)-Don't Call Me Spanky-(oo**UPDATED AGAIN!!**

[wallychairmover]

This is Spanky. She's got a big gun, click on link below to see hi res image....also here's a before shot when I first posted her so you can see the changes. thanks alot for the crits, i really worked hard on fixin alot of those things you folks caught, and a special thanks to ultramarinez, which I had to call in to do a professional assault crit on the image, and he really helped me bring it to the next level of quality I think:clapping2

High Res Image (http://www.fiddlegarden.com/spanky.jpg)
FINAL IMAGE
http://www.fiddlegarden.com/spanky_lores.jpg
FIRST RELEASE
http://www.fiddlegarden.com/spanky_before.jpg
http://www.fiddlegarden.com/spankydetail01.jpg
http://www.fiddlegarden.com/spankydetail02.jpg
http://www.fiddlegarden.com/spankydetail03.jpg:D

[jook]

haha. that smile face out of bullet holes is too classical. right in the middle of her shadow head.

It looks really nice. I especially like her hat and gun.

Her crotch area seems a bit funny. Her head seem a bit small. My two cents...

excellent work man...

[wallychairmover]

hey thanks for the ninja speed response jook, i was always thinkin that head was too small and thanks to you and other folks online i was right, so it was fixed, took some tinkerin but it's good now

the crotch is fine, her pants are just extremely low cut, just use the belly button as a spatial reference for distance of things, i saw a pic of a naked lady wearin nothin but a belt that was down that far, so i thought pants down that low would look pretty naughty

thanks again:D

[gallon]

Put some more work in the hair, some hardedged brushstrokes would really make it stand out a bit. Maybe chenge the colour of the dollface on the hat, make it look a bit more dirty and plastic. Right now it's the same colour as her face, and that's a bit distracting :) . Good work otherwise, and a nice looking gun too

[Jens]

Really good work on the body and the gun, but the head and especially the hat could use work. For the hat i would completely remove the baby face and the bullet on it

[Shadowkiller]

Love the stance and the expression on her face. I think you should put a little more deatal into the fourarm and wrist holding the gun it look like the hole arm is flat ad lanky.

[John]

Naughty chicks get all the replies :D
I like it a lot, if i would change one thing about the picture though it would be her mouth, the contrast on her lips is maximum, while her nose barely stands out. I like the nose the way it is, so it must be the lips.
I think her left hand looks great. I also like the pants, but you know, she'd better not run too fast.

[wallychairmover]

wow nice, it's like two art schools on one internet! you guys say almost completely different things from the people at poo. that rocks:D

alright gonna make this quick, i'll tinker with the following::

lip saturation (nice catch)

try to add volume to skin (my personal issue with this as well)

doll's head stays, never say that again!

try and get more definition/volume from hair

thanks alot for the crits, this is why I post so I don't embarass myself by thinkin I'm "all that and a bag of cheerios"

[Loga4]

Wonderful piece,wallychairmover!

[natethegrate]

i like the pic,
the shading is very smooth and its cool to see such a chick stoned...anyway the bulletholes are nicely painted and looks very good.

keep up

[wallychairmover]

I spent all day fixin spanky up so I think she deserves a second look, so I'm cheatin :D

[John]

Let me say just one thing:
:D