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diCharge
October 21st, 2009, 01:59 PM
Hey all!
I'm new here, and as a start at this forum I wanted to post some of my works. Didnt't really knew where to put so I hope this is the right place. I didn't want to post at finished artwork forum coz all the work there ware sooo kick-ass, neither would my work fit sketches. So here I am posting it here.

I would really like some serious critique coz I want to improve, so if you could see some repeating mistakes in all of the works, please let me know. Thank you a lot!

And here they are:

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs47/i/2009/234/1/6/Final_Strike_finished_by_lukas_art.jpg

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs48/i/2009/234/8/0/Final_Strike_close_up_by_lukas_art.jpg

http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs48/i/2009/226/b/9/Garage_by_lukas_art.jpg

http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs47/i/2009/217/e/3/Bridge_by_lukas_art.jpg

Sorry for giving you links. It's because of my internet connection issues.

:sungod:

Klausmasterflex
October 21st, 2009, 05:41 PM
Hey diCharge,

I took a look at your stuff and I do have some critiques. My main would be anatomy- try to take a look at some human figures to balance out your stuff. For example, in the first two the arms and hands are far too small. The left shoulder is also sunken into the ribs instead of where it should be.

Geir
October 22nd, 2009, 08:22 AM
I think the whole point of posting your works here is to actually post your work here. Not just links.

diCharge
October 22nd, 2009, 10:24 AM
Sorry bout that, I had problems with my internet. It wouldn've uploaded or it would've taken ages...