veraat's sketchbook(new stuff ) 27th april 2012

[nexus x]

hey guys im veraat new here still kinda stumbling through the site your help is welcome .. im from delhi ..here's some of my stuff tell me what u think enjoy..

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Here is another old sketch of mine

[bad_painter]

Not really sure what kind of feedback you're looking for, so I'll just speak honestly... you've got some very good ideas and seem to understand the basic principles of drawing, but some practice on form and proportion would surely improve what skill you already have.

You also might want to look into different cross-hatching techniques, as well, to help present the images more clearly to the viewer. "Rendering in Pen and Ink (http://www.amazon.com/Rendering-Pen-Ink-Techniques-Illustrators/dp/0823045293/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1255551694&sr=1-2)" is a nice book for learning such methods (albeit they're a little out-dated).

Anyway, good stuff here, so keep posting! ;)

[bhanu]

Hey ya Viru,
Good to see you getting started here buddy, just make sure to update regularly so you get proper feedback and critiques , and keep drawing bro.
Take care,
Bhanu.

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[nexus x]

thanks for the crits man really helped out

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here's some more stuff

[bad_painter]

Definitely more clear, but really define your forms and try to grasp how they overlap one another. For example, when drawing a tube, draw the whole oval at each end, then connect those ends with fluid lines. Same type of method applies for all shapes, which helps establish the overall form, so it becomes less flat. In fact, it's always a good idea to just practice drawing random circles, squares, ovals, etc. You'd be amazed how much that will improve your skills.

Also, you'll notice most people around here always suggest books by Loomis, Hogarth, Peck, etc. and there is merit in that... a solid understanding of anatomy will be one of the best weapons in your arsenal.

Looking forward to seeing more. ;)

[Spaggen]

Welcome! A great start I must say. I like the one in post #2 and the last piece. Now show us some studies!

Keep it up man. :)

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here are some study's i did

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there some fight action study's

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here's some other study's i did ..... i sometimes get bored of doing study's so i kinda combine them

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like in the above one i combined bone study with muscle .... i also used an imaginary face and applied the muscle later on

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here's another sketch ... im kinda obsessed with sketching wolfs ... big fan wolf's rain

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o thanks for the suggestion man

[bhanu]

Nice seeing some more studies from you buddy, I am sure these are recent, havent seen them earlier.
Some poses are real nice, also trying working on the line rhythm.
Take care

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hay guys here's two of my resent sketch's

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hay guys here's (rider man)

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another study

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hay guys sorry for not posting .. i was kinda trying to improve my skills so without further ado .. here some new stuff this is a new (wip)

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here another old sketch

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sorry heres the sketch

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this is a painting i made a year ago

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this was around the same time as the one above ...... they where also my final submission's

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sorry the scan sucks an most of the detailing is lost still try to bear with it

[Jansi]

Hey there,

You have very nice anatomical progress going on and some beautiful colour work, so well done so far. You seem to know what to do - so do more of it! That's the only way to move on. Would be nice to see some very copious, neat shading and hatching, etc, as someone had already suggested you study those things. Go back a bit - look into academic drawing, it will really help you to understand shape and form and how to make your characters really pop instead of staying kind of flat every time.

Best wishes,

Ana

[bhanu]

Hey man, this ones looking really good, will you be shading it as well?
I Like it all, I just dont understand the shapes up there on the top mid- top right, the scales like things that are clasping to the creature.

What are they???
I am curious.
And take the pic of visions of paradise pic too man.


Oh and go and edit the first post to change the update date to current, right now its 14th Oct, which today is not :P

Take care man.

[nexus x]

thanks for the crit . Ana right .. actually I used to do a lot of shading but i got a lot of flack about anatomy .... ill put some of my shaded work next time... but thanks once again n feel free to comment

[cgaddict]

Very unique work here, keep practicing on construction and anatomy and you'll do great.

[nexus x]

hay bhanu finally pieced it together i tried to remove most of the separation...anyways enjoy

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sorry here the pic

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here are two that i shaded . This is vertibre

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this is the other ..wired

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thanks CGaddict... appreciate it man

[Crahzz]

I quite like the surrealistic style in here. Some of the linework and compositions you are using remind me of a blend between giger and Yoshitaka Amano.. it's quite odd actually. However I'd like to add to that that some of your linework can become a little chaotic making it hard to see what exactly it is we are looking at. I think this primarily has to do with the way you shade you drawings. Sometimes there is not enough tonal value difference to make the subject clear enough. In the last thing you've posted it's cleared up a lot more so I advice sticking to the method you've used there =)

[bhanu]

good that you are in the posts again homie. Keep at it. Now make soem more and start posting regularly,what say buddy?

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thanks Crahzz appreciate it ..... it happens some times when i take the pics i loose some of the tonal value .....funny you should mention those two are my fav artists

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here some more stuff

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:teeth: anyone whose ever played games knows who this is i did a tribute one day when i got nostalgic the other ones my version

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here is another W.I.P its called conjoined fetus hand

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bin a long time since i was here...... lets upload

[bhanu]

Hey man... try putting a smaller sized image... so its easier to look at.

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heres another one

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some new stuff

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two more i did today first ones called Medusa

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some new stuff im doing for a protect

[Joe777k7]

Crazy awesome!!! Keep up the great worrk, very creative stuff here!!

[N0N]

These are great! I really enjoy post 22 and 23. keep pushing the surrealism!

[bhanu]

Awesome stuff bro

[nexus x]

hay guys thanks for the comments
heres some new stuff to enjoy 1st ones called RED 2ed done in red n 3rd just there for good measure :)

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heres some of the stuff i did the damned book

[TFsean]

woah man aha, pretty crazy stuff aha. Cool to see lots of fresh stuff though :)

[nexus x]

thanks man appreciate it