View Full Version : Creepy City of the Future
moops
January 20th, 2004, 03:37 PM
Took me about 1.5 - 2 hours. Should have refined it a bit more, Ah well, must eat cheap chinese food now. I enjoy C + C.
http://www.angelfire.com/comics/naart/painting/structure.jpg
ProudestMonkey
January 20th, 2004, 11:12 PM
I think this would kick TONS of ass if you just refined it... and made some depth changes...
But i love the color selection...
Proudest
moops
January 21st, 2004, 04:05 PM
Thanks for the feedback Proudestmonkey, what sort of depth changes?
Davidskiwan
January 21st, 2004, 04:20 PM
I think from half way across the pic, there is a noticable difference in detail.... i think it looks cool, but the detail is all on the left side, so i think it makes it look a little unbalanced, but it still looks good
Legato
January 21st, 2004, 06:00 PM
as of now, i think its really hard to pick out what everything is... its hard to see what your looking at. i think if you refined it more it would be easier to pick stuff out
johanson
January 22nd, 2004, 12:29 PM
You're really building up a nice mood in this piece. But it's killing me that we can't see the ground plane. I REALLY want to see that ground plane. The gargoyles can still be the focus of the piece, but having a nice dark street with trash cans and grates would really help me understand exactly how those gargoyles relate to their environment.
By the way, good call on tilting the horizon line.
later,
-andrew
Lad
January 22nd, 2004, 12:35 PM
Reminds me of the Temples in Metroid Prime, which is a good thing. It looks awsome but my only complaint is that it could be better if you added detail. Keep working on it and it will turn out just fine.
moops
January 22nd, 2004, 07:16 PM
Ok, so needs more detail, got it.
Johanson, adding a ground plane is a great idea, thanks bud.
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