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[bengal]

here is my latest piece, done entirely with painter ; i tried to use this software on my comicker's usual style... i have lot of things to learn, so your critics are welcome, of course!

http://www.cafesale.net/bengal/gallery/lalipuna.jpg

[Aleksi]

I like the design. "Tasty" !!
I think there is a little problem : the head is too close of the border of the picture. You should have cut more of the character or center her a little more.

nothing to say about Painter, good job !!

[morphine]

Hi, bengal! Nice pic. I didn't notice the transparency at first so she looked sort of EXTREMELY "boobed" lol.

I'm learning Painter too, perhaps we could exchange techniques if not just tips. Did you want it (the piece) to have that brushed look or not?

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.//edit: I mean I LOVE your style.

[Lung_bug]

interesting stylisation. what bothers me the most, same thing with the other pic you post, is the rendering of the cheek. makes the whole head look bloated, spherical, tooth-ache kinda problematic. it's a rather minor flaw here, but the head on the other pic looks really weird.

[amphex]

Very cool work.
Love the colors and style =D

[cchen]

Hi,

Pretty girl, but im not sure where the light is coming from. It's like the light is shining from us the viewer, but that does not hold consistent when we see her pale well-lit face. Your outline work is good, but your inner structuring is questionable. You have strong darks and shadows with faint tones of light which may be style or may be a lack of understanding color and light. It like the work is not yet finished -but then again maybe it isn't.

Your the judge.

-CC

[cchen]

sorry, I meant the darks are coming from the veiwer and the lights seem to hit her on both sides (front and back)

I had it backwards... :bash: