one more nice girl

[Miguel]

comments comments and comments are welcome
;)
http://www.iespana.es/fooltoons/MAINGIRL.jpg

my website (http://www.foltoons.es.kz)
playlogicgames' site (http://www.playlogicgames.com)

[Alex K.]

The image doesn't work, I get the feared red 'X'.

[Rusty Red Robot]

That's a nice pic. The girl is cute, and I like the color of her hair. My only suggestion would be to put something in the background. The black background flattens the image.

[janni]

Hey Miguel, thats some sweeeet piece of art!

I like that huge rocket between her legs... must give her some good feelings ;)
But i think her facial expression does not quite fit the situation she is in. Now she is looking kinda sweet and innocent. Maybe you should give her something more like a seductive and longing expression. But maybe that was just what you didn't wanted to do, so just listen to me...

Second, i agree with Rusty Red Robot about the background. The idea that she kinda vanishes into the dark is nice, but it does not fit that well in this piece, i think. give it a brighter background and make it perfect!

oh, and one more thing... maybe the face needs some more light, make it the focus! the viewer wants to see her beatiful face, don't cover it in shadow!

Keep up the great work!

[Ryfio]

shes a hottie man
keep it up

Ry

[Miguel]

Originally posted by janni
Hey Miguel, thats some sweeeet piece of art!

I like that huge rocket between her legs... must give her some good feelings ;)
But i think her facial expression does not quite fit the situation she is in. Now she is looking kinda sweet and innocent. Maybe you should give her something more like a seductive and longing expression. But maybe that was just what you didn't wanted to do, so just listen to me...

Second, i agree with Rusty Red Robot about the background. The idea that she kinda vanishes into the dark is nice, but it does not fit that well in this piece, i think. give it a brighter background and make it perfect!

oh, and one more thing... maybe the face needs some more light, make it the focus! the viewer wants to see her beatiful face, don't cover it in shadow!

Keep up the great work!


yesyes, it's true :-) but it was only a fast rough. The idea was to work the background in another layer and work the lights together.
it's only a fast sketch of the main character of one computer game... only the basic idea

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[janni]

oh, thought it was some kind of illustration rather than a game concept.
this is a very nice character design, though!

eheh, just noticed that i misread that blue lighted piece of long hair as some sort of tail... looks kinda funny ;)

[DanielandTheLionsPen]

That's phucking awesome Miguel.

Your work is on par with disney animators, I'm sure you know that already. I've looked over your website and your work is on a level of smooth and stylish, yet cartoonish and playful, that I have ALWAYS wanted to emulate.

That isn't to say I have always wanted to draw like YOU, but your work is where I want to be one day as an artist...

now if only I can get used to this Wacom!!!

:)

Seriously man I wish there was something I could do to develop a style like yours.

[TJ Verhagen]

Thats very nice man, thx for sharing!
:D

[lowpolymatt]

love it. Nice work. Reminds me of the original character art for the original wipeout game on ps1....

Cool stuff!