Dorothy!! :D -nudity big d/l (updated)

[Phuzion]

-So this is the updated version... please, more crits. I may not change this one anymore, but at least if you crit, I can keep it all in mind for future projects. Peace-


Okay, I suppose I can call this finished for now... until I decide I HAVE to change something. Anywho, for a brief moment I thought about taking my Thunder Dome entry along this road ;p Heh heh... But, I can't change Oz THAT much... at least not and still keep a clear conscience. Crits are more than welcome! There are some things I noticed already, and will change in the near future... breasts are rather uneven in size... boots still need work, as does hair and perhaps eyes... yeah. I suppose reference would've made this a lot easier, but what can I say. I'm stubborn and like to try and do all this shit out of my head. Enough rambling. Peace ;p

http://www.savagesunarts.com/Post/Dorothy-White.jpg

This is a detail almost at 100% size... but not quite:
http://www.savagesunarts.com/Post/Detail_Hand.jpg

Process: I did a quick 10 minute sketch, scanned it, and airbrushed it in Photoshop CS.

[marc-pierre]

like that one - u did a great job with the hand.

only crit would be, that the outlines on her right side (the dark one) are somehow messy which destroy the clean feeling of it a lil.

but besides this: good job! :D

[SinisteR]

What hit me right in the face was that her breasts look like they arent attached to her chest. Though I really aint an expert with the female sex (at drawing, ya know :P).

Besides that, it`s great.

[Phuzion]

AAAAAAAHHHH!! You know when you sleep on something for a while, then you come back and realize that there is SOOOO much you need to work on? Heh heh... will post the update later today I think. Thanks both of you ;p Peace

[Muttonhead]

Nice work. One thing that stands out is that her elbow seems to be a bit too high, or rather her forearm is too long.

Also I would define the back arm a bit more too so that it does not look like she has one severed arm.