Guitar piece

[AmPed]

So I'm in advanced guitar at my school, and we took chords from a song called 'She was mine' By aj rafael and another philipino artist. We used the same chords and just the chorus (lyrics) from the song and through in random solos and such.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4I06ke7AKw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4I06ke7AKw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4I06ke7AKw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4I06ke7AKw

I'm on the far right >.<
Any criticism would be great