I'm Home

[ShawnYe]

Just thought I could share this little picture that I made sometime ago. Its not totally finish but I do not know where to push it. Any idea what I can do?

http://www.shawnye.com/images/ImHome.jpg

It started from this little sketch.

http://www.shawnye.com/images/ImHomesketch.jpg

[John]

I think that while the upper half of the picture is really cool, the lower half of the water looks rushed, especially the tiles in the background. The robot is cool, but imho the water needs more work. Definitely finish it! :)

[SEVANS]

What exactly is the thing in the right hand corner? It looks kind of like a TV to me.

Agree with the comment about the water needing more work. The robots lower body is fairly clear and easy to see under the water, but the tiles are very blurred. I don't believe that you can see ripples under the water, just on the surface, so the tiles shouldn't be rippled'

Nice colour selection, good basic robot design, the image just need more work.