pencil from cd cover

[eljay]

i sketched this from a jewel cd cover while waiting for dinner lastnight. Realy this is the first time ive sketched like this with pencil. Usualy I just scribble... any c&c or suggestions welcome. Thanks

mechanical pencil about 35 40 min...
http://members.cox.net/fall3n/sketchbook/images/bnwsketch011604.jpg