Fernosaur
September 16th, 2009, 05:37 AM
Hey guys, I used to have an account here a million years ago but I forgot :'D. So now I came back with this sketch I cmae up with some minutes ago. I actually didn't intend to make this a whole pic with a background, I was just gonna draw the dude that's standing up in a heroic pose and all...and then this happened, haha. So yeah, the composition...I can't decide wether to use sample A or sample B (see below).
But I'm asking for your help mooossstttllyyy because of the characters' positions and all that. I had quite a lot of trouble with the guy that's sitting's legs, as well as the arm that's carrying the shield. I'm still not convinced so I came running here. I hope I can get some help c:.
And well, anything that you notice, just shoot. It's still pretty rough so don't hold back. Oh and that blob in the background of both pictures is like a giant (and I mean freaking GIANT) tree that literally reaches the sky, it's a bit important to the whole thing so that's why it's taking that half of the picture. I'm open for advice on that, though!
Whatcha think?
For now I think I'm gonna go with sample B... and probably make it wider and more "cinematic" or something.
Sample A:
http://4calendarcafe.com/Random/HazelLancaster1.jpg
Sample B:
http://4calendarcafe.com/Random/HazelLancaster2.jpg
But I'm asking for your help mooossstttllyyy because of the characters' positions and all that. I had quite a lot of trouble with the guy that's sitting's legs, as well as the arm that's carrying the shield. I'm still not convinced so I came running here. I hope I can get some help c:.
And well, anything that you notice, just shoot. It's still pretty rough so don't hold back. Oh and that blob in the background of both pictures is like a giant (and I mean freaking GIANT) tree that literally reaches the sky, it's a bit important to the whole thing so that's why it's taking that half of the picture. I'm open for advice on that, though!
Whatcha think?
For now I think I'm gonna go with sample B... and probably make it wider and more "cinematic" or something.
Sample A:
http://4calendarcafe.com/Random/HazelLancaster1.jpg
Sample B:
http://4calendarcafe.com/Random/HazelLancaster2.jpg