Illustration(s)..(Updated Image)

[bRyaN]

Made shortly after me and my ex broke up a number of months ago...something i had to get off my chest...

http://img12.photobucket.com/albums/v30/bRyaN83/First_Night2.jpg

8x7 Art Board
Pencil and ink(brush and tech pen)
Touched up a tad in Photoshop

Not my usual stuff...

Sorry for the poor quality once again photoshop is still foreign to me...

[malicious]

seems like it's always hard to comment on stuff that holds emotional value. this one took a minute for me to figure out. perhaps the image would be better communicated if you rotated the image 90 degrees counter clockwise.

the foreheads may be a little overstylized, especially on the female subject.

(now i note that you made this in a permanent nondigital media. yeah, just rotate it, and it'll communicate the image a whole lot easier.)

good luck on the relationship stuff.

[DanSTC]

I imagine that my future "break-up art" will look something like Gerald Scarffe's work for Pink Floyd's "The Wall."

[bRyaN]

Fellas critique away...no punches should be pulled

This almost like a first time doing anything remotely "fine artsy" for me...

And for clarification, it was done last week...but me and my ex broke up a number of months ago...:D

malicious-thanks i really notice the over stylized forehead, after it was inked, it didn't look that bad before i swear :rolleyes:

I'll be posting more stuff when i get home from work...

[Skank]

Originally posted by bRyaN
I'll be posting more stuff when i get home from work...

damn skippy you will!!!

:D

good to see ya up and runnin man

[bRyaN]

Heh..Skank, i knew you would be comin through soon...

Thanks for the Photobucket link...if it wasn't for you, i would not have set this lil display up...

I have one more design coming up in this thread then a lil something for our T-Dome battle..

[Skank]

smooth

:rock:

[Palm]

Maybe Im stupid, but I dont get this.=)
Anyways, how old are u Bryan?

[Palm]

ohh.. Its 2 faces.=D Lol.. guess I am stupid.

[bRyaN]

Soon to be 21 bro...

i will try to alter some things make it easier to decipher..time to fumble with photoshop...