a little practice ^^!

[bellas]

crit comment do you known
http://www.iespana.es/bellasart/dibujos/pipa_libro.jpg

[SABRE]

TIENES PROBLEMAS DE PERSPECTIVA, Y UN POCO DE VALORES....:(

EL LIBRO ESTA BUENO ME GUSTO, CON QUE LO TRABAJASTE?? UN 2B??




CIAOO....................

PD: POR FIN "HABLAR" ALGO DE ESPAÑOL EN EL FORO!! =)

[bellas]

lo he retocado un poco, se ve mejor ahora? ampt he utilizado varias durezas

[SEVANS]

There seems to be some perspective issues, and the image needs more contrast to avoid it appearing flat. Don't be afraid to lay down dark areas.

To me the lighter looks out of place (and the perspective seems off).

Just keep practising.

[die_with_honor]

nice perspective frenchy
hehehe
just joking abuot the frenchy thing i like the picture its kind of classie

[SABRE]

IWAL LE FALTA DEFINICION DE CONTRASTES Y VOLUMEN...POR EJEMPLO LA SOMBRA DE LA PLUMA QUE EXTRAÑA....PERO LO QUE CREO QUE DESBALANCEA TODA LA IMAGEN ES LA PERSPECTIVA DEL ENCENDEDOR....AUNQUE VAS POR BUEN CAMINO!!

ESPERO SEGUIR VIENDO ALGUNA EVOLUCION, O ALGUN OTRO TRABAJO!!



CIAOO............................

[die_with_honor]

Try english americans may not be to cool but some people cant understand what you are writing

[threelegged_chicken]

yeah lay off the spanish talkin' for us self-absorbe americans who are so enamored with the sound of our on voices that we don't think we should be kind enough to learn other languages so as to put others at ease.

-a self-concerned-centered-and-conscience American and proud of it


nah i like the pic and agree most heartedly with the wonderful responses above.

3-leg

[AnarchyAo2]

According to die with honor, people from spain and chile speak french. hehe

My only crit is that some of the shading looks smudgy, as opposed to smooth.

[ProudestMonkey]

dwh, maybe he doesn't know english? why speak english when there are people that can speak your language, and you can get your point across much easier.

bellas- Tengo gusto de su dibujo, pero hay algunos problemas de la perspectiva como la otra gente dicha. Intente obscurecer en algunas áreas. Excusa mi espanol por favore, es no muy buena.

continúe el buen trabajo

Proudest

[bellas]

ok thanks for your crits, i will work hard to improve those things, thanks for your help people ^n_n^
I usually translate from babelfish.altavista.com ^n_n^ do all ways the art does not have language ;) an sorry for my bad english

[die_with_honor]

Dont fell bad my english sucks and im from america. I would learn other langages but i think i should learn ths one first