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3zTAN
January 14th, 2004, 04:45 AM
just trying sketch some characters,what do you think about it?
http://3ztan.szm.sk/kd/1_big_hair.jpg
http://3ztan.szm.sk/kd/2_dark_face.jpg
http://3ztan.szm.sk/kd/3_last_decision.jpg
http://3ztan.szm.sk/kd/4_long_look.jpg
http://3ztan.szm.sk/kd/5_long_scream.jpg
kemm
January 14th, 2004, 05:01 AM
Nice 3zTan! Love your first one.
But I think you need to caracterize you caracters a bit.
Especially the bald guy, he could be anybody - caracters need distinction and details to give them the more original look.
The first one is great beacuse his personality
is well expressed. Keep it up!
SEVANS
January 14th, 2004, 08:56 PM
Yes, I agree with kemm.
Apart from the funky hair / tentacle things these faces could be straight from a how to draw book.
You have captured volume, shape, tone etc well but not character. I don't look at these images and pictured his & her personality etc.
-The Swift-
January 15th, 2004, 04:56 AM
cool sketches! attitude sums it up!!!!!!!!:D
Skrich
January 15th, 2004, 07:41 AM
nice pic from bengal... (4th)
5-0
January 15th, 2004, 01:50 PM
i like them, you lines seem abit to edgy and sharp, but if this is what you are trying to achieve with your lines. then it looks good.
keep up the work, they do seem to show no expression what so ever. They would look nicer if they showed a smile or a different facial expression.
my favorite is the third one. It would look like an awesome digital peice, like a 3d head with some decent 2d work like you are showing there.
3zTAN
January 16th, 2004, 04:47 AM
Thanks for tips, could you give me good example of good character ?
Elantriell
January 16th, 2004, 11:57 AM
The 1st one is my favorite, i think it would look really nice if colored.
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