Flying girl

[MadSun]

Does anyone here read Robert Heinlein? This idea is from a 1957 story about flying in large air-filled caverns on the moon. And yeah, I used the zoom blur-but I think it works in this composition. So let me have it, I can take it without crying.
(I think)

http://madsenink.com/flygirl.jpg

[JFS]

I do like the character(s). But I think the zoom-blur makes your pic (if it's standalone) seem best fit for a sequence in a comic strip...
Sorry if I make little sense :)

[sone_one]

Originally posted by MadSun
So let me have it, I can take it without crying.
(I think)


there you go :D

ive written a lot as reply.... but it made no sense at all i guess^^

heres the essence of what i wanted to say....

figure -> me likes
background -> me donot like


[edit] lol ive replied before ive seen scrawnehs post... seems to me we both had the same problems (not knowing whats bugging ^^)

[MadSun]

scrawneh- I never really thought about it. It's just kind of a fun idea.
SONE_ONE- What don't you like about the background? the blur?

[sone_one]

thats whats so hard here for me to define.

id remove the blur first.

imo there isnt goin on enough to be illustrative and to much to be graphic.

damn i still dont know to express better sorry.

*sidenote* imo it lacks of compositional tension (the whole pic i mean)

[MadSun]

sone_one- Can you explain how it lacks 'compositional tension'. I'm not defending the pic-I'm really interested in feedback.